cold task

in class. we do a cold task a piece of writing you do and it tells the teacher what you already know and after that, you do a self-assessment, a dot means Not yet, two ticks mean developing, and three ticks mean super good.

My next step is to use some figurative language 

 One nice easter day I was at my best friend Tailah’s house getting ready for a trip to go to one of her grandma's houses for an easter hunt and a barbeque.

I was in Tailah’s room at the time I was doing my hair and getting ready then I was walking out of the room when I tripped and landed on a glass door and shattered the glass slicing my hand when I looked at it I Could See the bone of my thumb then my hand was all covered in blood.

Tailah’s mum walked out of her room wondering who was crying, she took one look at my hand and ran me to the kitchen and grabbed paper towels and applied pressure to my wound then she called her husband and he came and told me to sit on the couch.

Tailah’s mum called 111 and answered all the questions the nurse asked. At the same time, Tailah’s dad was rapping my hand.